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Yes Yes Yes - Sweet!!!!

Really feeling it now Mark, catchy & flowing and feeling like a radio hit

I like Brandon alot, but you definlity without a question fit the song better vocally.
His style is too soft, the song is soft enough and you hit that nice middle. It needed a little bite somewhere yet still keep its emotion and soft passionate side. Perfect!

The chorus is really good, and I loved the new bridge... very cool meter in the first half. Harmonies were great, the second verse was excellent lyrically.

All the parts had hooks, all the lyrics were on the mark and not forced.

Cold, angry silence again and again
Talking, then talking some more
What's left to say that we haven't said ten times before?

That is a perfect pre-chorus!

The demo had power and body & sounded good. The bass work was nice as well as the guitars especially in the background, great lead hook there... love the 6/4 feel. I would have tore the drums up on this track major

I really liked it Mark and I was singing right along, this is one of those songs I love to produce with all buit in hooks and a great feel.

Way to go Pal.... I'm excited and feel great for you on this..

I had a killer add lib vocal idea for the ending, for that one more chorus and some of that the lead could sit behind the chorus....

Hope you made an instrumental mix as well, feel free to email me an instrumental version I could lay off that vocal idea for a future slightly alternate version for you,
and I'll throw that lead guitar in there as well.

Oh and that would be FREE OF CHARGE! people who participate in my contest and of course are cool get special treatment.. Its a Bias Industry Right? LOL...