The lyrics fit well and it has a very pleasant melody. I would have picked up on that one line also but Wayne beat me to the punch. My only nit is the overall arrangement and balance was to bassy and muddy. For my ears it needs to be a bit lighter with more top end. The vocals were great but just too far back in the mix. I agree with Niteshift the drums were too heavy and up front. I think a twelve string ringing out might bring it together a bit more.