Mark,

This is a very well crafted lyric. The only glitch for me was; I wanted to sing "Promises we're gonna break" in the chorus. Not really sure what it is but the way you phrase it just doesn't flow as smoothly for me. That is a minor snag. other than that I loved it.

Wayne


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The final words of Poncho Villa

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