Hi again lol...

Samual & Nite have great suggestions...

The guitar is not great but I LOVE that it's there instead of not. The sound could be better, this reminds me of my buddy and me.. we used to have guitar like this same sound bascially as well, in the background of all our tunes smile

I love the ideas and that you are being so musical it's just more hooks on top of hooks. Pick the spots and edit it a little bit and your set. I don't know if a new sound or replaying it is feasible at this point for you.

Nite - is right what he's bacially saying is the song really merrits all those good suggestions. He can tell like I can this is something special and wants to do it justice.

Okay - Sorry to butt in so much on your replys, but I thought with these very direct opinions and suggestions you might need a second opinion like asking a band member lol... "well there all good"

I won't let up on you on this one Mark it's a winner bro. I can easily hear it being played every 40 minutes in every kind of office in every city in the country, on a lite FM station.. TOTALLY!

We wanna see you do good and we're proud of you. I know I am.

So What do you think of that? smile

Thanks!
Peace Mike
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