Hi Vanessa

Thanks for your visit and thinking this through with me. I like the way you critique its like thinking alongside the person. As I said to Pete above I'm not ready to give up on powdered. The powder scales of color pigment are what allow a butterfly to fly and give them an irridescent quality.

As far as the line switch, I can see it working your way as well as mine. 'spending days searching' makes sense too...and I wanted to open with the 'spinning silk' because I believe it is more catchy. Don't mind you messing with it at all though, this is why we post, yes?

I'm considering your thought on 'maybe'. The one in the bridge surely can go. In my mind the other leads into the chorus 'maybe I am in contemplation' not maybe I will fly, which I believed was a given. Glad you've pointed to some questions. Thanks so much for your time. [Linked Image] jm

PS Oops forgot to mention the blue love...lost love to me is blue love

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