Good Morning to you Stan.

Thanks for stopping here and for the glistening word to ponder. These kind of word choices often sort out when it gets the music added. I'm hoping it will be clear by then. I do get your make up connection. Don't know that many would be thinking of that in this context. I'm of the thinking that a little of that can be okay, but not overdone...

I'll do a seach look for the moth you suggest today too."CECROPIA" Thanks for a pretty option.

I like the shades of blue as a hook idea too, thanks for the encouragement.

The chorus is short, but the tempo as a whole might be slow. Seems so far with my music, I end up having to trim songs to get them short enough. I'm not a fast picker yet. But the chorus can be lengthened or repeated if needed. I'm okay on that idea.

I appreciate all the nice feedbback. Thank you kindly. [Linked Image] jm

PS I missed the remove "this" idea, I like it. thanks again!

[This message has been edited by joice marie (edited 10-03-2006).]

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