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Bayside
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 10:48 PM
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Joined: Jun 2006
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Hi JM, Count me in as another vote for "Powdered." Maybe "powdery" would alleviate that dust cloud. ?? LOL I knew about butterfly wings--some might not, but those who do will know what you mean. They really can't fly without it, so it's a significant feature. Keep it in! I love the imagery and the emergence theme. Spinning silk was great too. Nicely done overall!! Linda PS (edit ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/smile.gif) Of course glistening ALSO works nicely because the wings are wet coming out of the cocoon, and the image in the lyric is of that moment of emergence/birth. (how's that for waffling!) ------------------ Linda Adams Read about my novels: http://www.alyssastory.com Bits & pieces of music: www.soundclick.com/lindaadams [This message has been edited by adamszoo (edited 10-06-2006).]
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