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<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by writefortune:
Buzz

Being a fat man myself this piece didn't inspire me to have any feelings good or bad about it other than I think it's well written.
I got to be honest with you I really enjoyed the read.

This is what I like about Graham..
"Given he is 12 years younger, four inches shorter, ten pounds heavier, and can't pick up, and carry my anvil I most often now use as a weights machine, I am convinced the bugger does not have a full length mirror"
He he that's what makes reading these posts so much fun


Good write!

Need more emotional conflict.


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Eric, I like Graham too and I appreciate the way he approaches songwriting. I value his input and just happen to disagree with him this time. But he's only being honest about how he would approach the subject and what he likes. How can I argue with that?

Thank you for your input and I'm glad it didn't offend you. I could stand to lose a few (okay, more than a few) pounds myself.

Van

Van Borden
a.k.a. Buzz Grudge