Hi Buzz...

it definitely hits a nerve with lots of us..
that plate the guy's lookin at..mirrors
back..a larger self..to many folks.(me thinks) no matter
how slender they are....

all that aside...what jumped out at me..
was so much rhyming...not that it's bad...
i'd just like maybe a bit more break-up in it.

best.........
Kaley [Linked Image]