Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
Knew he couldnt contain himself.

Were you asking for feedback or why did you post your lyric here? If you don't want anybody to respond, don't post in the first place.
Yeah, twice in the chorus - but the whole thing is still the same idea over and over. If that’s all you took from the critique, you kinda proved my point. You call this interesting? Yeah, it really looks like it was written in two minutes. That explains all the typos.