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http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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Hi, Louis. This is a very personal song. As is I like it. But I would love to hear it in the context of more of your life experiences rather than songwriting. (It could be that I just don't like songs about songwriting.)
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Naw, I made it all up Thanks Jean, probably won't add anymore to it though.
http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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Well, if my co-writer comes across with anything I'll rethink it
http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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Hey Louis,
I liked the lyric and the delivery. I think it's pretty cleverly done to tie Jesus in as the co-writer the way that you did it. I was expecting something different from the title but in my opinion you tied it all together real nice. I don't have a problem with writing about songwriting. Elton John's "Your Song" comes to mind pretty easily.
Best Wishes Kevin
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Wow Louis, I liked that song a lot. Very touching story.
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Thanks Kevin, the idea came to me at 4am this morning Hi Jared, thanks for stopping by.. I've been listening to your tunes, I'm truely impressed, everybody out to check out Jared, serious tunes.
http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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If Jesus can be a co-pilot, why not a co-writer? It's a novel take on an old concept - which means folks should like it because it's both familiar and new. That's my theory anyway Nice idea! Scott
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Another good tune by you and your co-writer. The recording quality on your vocals is pretty good on this one.
Kevin
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Scott, great theory Thanks Kevin, think it's a little low for me at the first. Nothing like a lot of reverb
http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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Hi Louis, Amazing song..very cool concept, great way to pull Jesus into a song, and giving credit where it's due.
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I love this Louis, wonderful job Dan
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This is so Louis and so nice. If you made up the story as you said you certainly made it seem personal. A real good one, real good. Hey when it comes to co-writers, why not have the best. It doesn't get better than that or Him I should say. Best, Lynn
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Thanks Caroline, yep He gets a co-write Thanks Dan Thanks Lynn, Yep He's probably the best co-writer you could get
http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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