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Leather-Bound Horror Story https://suno.com/song/941f60eb-4858-4d76-80a3-b34f9f0da182Verse 1 Opens with a murder scene and a warning label Blood on the ground before the dinner table God gets bored, flips a switch, starts over Kills damn near everybody, saves one boat owner Talking snake sells a lie like truth Punishment falls on the naked and the confused If this was fiction, it’d be banned in schools But you hand it to kids and call it the rules Pre-Chorus They say it’s love, they say it’s light Why does it read like fear every night? Chorus It reads like a Stephen King novel No edits, no mercy clause Everybody’s guilty, somebody’s chosen Violence dressed up as God’s applause Fire solves it, blood explains it Faith comes stapled to the threat Call it holy, call it wisdom I call it leather-bound fear porn scripture set Verse 2 Cities burn ‘cause somebody sinned Kids get cursed for the shape they’re in Bears tear flesh for a punchline joke That’s canon—go ahead, look it up, folks Plagues rain down like entertainment Firstborn dead for dramatic placement Every lesson ends the same damn way Obey or suffer, kneel or decay Pre-Chorus Red ink, black ink, same damn sound Power talking while bodies hit the ground Chorus It reads like a Stephen King novel Wrath first, grace on delay Angels kill with a clean conscience Sins get passed like hereditary pain Blood on doors, screams in the night God’s always right ‘cause God’s got might They call it truth, I call it threat Scare ‘em straight into heaven, baptize regret Bridge (spoken / half-time) If this is love, it’s abusive If this is truth, it’s coercive “Believe or burn” ain’t salvation That’s a hostage negotiation Last Chorus (drop instruments, come back heavy) Reads like a Stephen King novel Only horror with a choir stamp Every question met with thunder Every doubt lit by a lamp I ain’t saying throw it away I’m saying read it without the spell ‘Cause if hell’s real, they wrote the manual And sold it as a stairway outta hell Outro Amen. Now tell me that ain’t a scary book. Amen… and turn the damn light back on.
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Leather-Bound Horror Story https://suno.com/song/941f60eb-4858-4d76-80a3-b34f9f0da182Verse 1 Opens with a murder scene and a warning label Blood on the ground before the dinner table God gets bored, flips a switch, starts over Kills damn near everybody, saves one boat owner Talking snake sells a lie like truth Punishment falls on the naked and the confused If this was fiction, it’d be banned in schools But you hand it to kids and call it the rules Pre-Chorus They say it’s love, they say it’s light Why does it read like fear every night? Chorus It reads like a Stephen King novel No edits, no mercy clause Everybody’s guilty, somebody’s chosen Violence dressed up as God’s applause Fire solves it, blood explains it Faith comes stapled to the threat Call it holy, call it wisdom I call it leather-bound fear porn scripture set Verse 2 Cities burn ‘cause somebody sinned Kids get cursed for the shape they’re in Bears tear flesh for a punchline joke That’s canon—go ahead, look it up, folks Plagues rain down like entertainment Firstborn dead for dramatic placement Every lesson ends the same damn way Obey or suffer, kneel or decay Pre-Chorus Red ink, black ink, same damn sound Power talking while bodies hit the ground Chorus It reads like a Stephen King novel Wrath first, grace on delay Angels kill with a clean conscience Sins get passed like hereditary pain Blood on doors, screams in the night God’s always right ‘cause God’s got might They call it truth, I call it threat Scare ‘em straight into heaven, baptize regret Bridge (spoken / half-time) If this is love, it’s abusive If this is truth, it’s coercive “Believe or burn” ain’t salvation That’s a hostage negotiation Last Chorus (drop instruments, come back heavy) Reads like a Stephen King novel Only horror with a choir stamp Every question met with thunder Every doubt lit by a lamp I ain’t saying throw it away I’m saying read it without the spell ‘Cause if hell’s real, they wrote the manual And sold it as a stairway outta hell Outro Amen. Now tell me that ain’t a scary book. Amen… and turn the damn light back on. Frank couldn't possibly write or perform any part of this...
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Yes, Frank... You should be afraid.
Dark clouds hang like sin
Telling tales of men
Looks like rain again
To mark a fruitless end
Thunder sounds like dying
In hearts full of lying
Exhausted bones defying
Life's intent expiring
Onlookers can not cry
Elders don't wonder why
Umbrellas hide the eyes
That crave virtue to imply
Wicked wages are death
Darkness collects its debt
Demons revel in depth
Waiting for one last breath
Storm clouds weeping sin
Lamenting deeds of men
Feels like rain again
For my faithless friend...
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I'm a purist.
Tyranny in the name of God and Jesus Christ can only be a good thing.
Bow and pledge allegiance to the King in the name of all that is Holy!
Or, submit to the lawful commonwealth as a slave under penalty of death.
Hallelujah!
THY KINGDOM COME, THY WILL BE DONE!
I don't have any heartfelt understanding
I'm fed up with petulant Woke demanding
I don't want lasting peace with my enemy
I just want the shortest fuk'n war in history
You're wrong, I can take a hit
You're right, I'm a hypocrite
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Why should I afraid ? It reads like a horror story. God works in fear tactics , its true.. You bow on your knees to me , that a hostage negotiation .Tyranny in the name of God and Jesus Christ can only be a good thing. See your a fanatic .
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THIS IS WHY (A I) IS MAKING EVERYONE SICK! Ai is not making everyone sick. Some songwriters use AI as a songwriting tool. It takes some to learn how it can work for you.
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its a fresh angle Tony , You notice on end he says Amen, meaning he believes it . He's just stating the obvious the Bible reads like a horror story , which is true.
H.E.L.L. – Human Error, Learned Late
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There is a lot of blasphemy on this site. Don't you all know that every word you speak is written down as a witness against or for you in the judgement.
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You talk to God you're way , I'll talk to em my way .He also said don't judge , and that exactly what your doing , You can twist them scriptures any way that fits your agenda
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Strange... Seems every idiot throughout history has claimed intellectual superiority to God.
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Don't you all know that every word you speak is written down as a witness against or for you in the judgement. Really? This is awesome. I'd love to have access to these writings. It would be helpful to prove that my wife didn't ask me to take out the garbage like she said she did.
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Don't you all know that every word you speak is written down as a witness against or for you in the judgement. Really? This is awesome. I'd love to have access to these writings. It would be helpful to prove that my wife didn't ask me to take out the garbage like she said she did. 
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Don't you all know that every word you speak is written down as a witness against or for you in the judgement. Really? This is awesome. I'd love to have access to these writings. It would be helpful to prove that my wife didn't ask me to take out the garbage like she said she did. Thats right , ya liar. And why is my job , its that some kind of women lib bs ? Maybe it’s in the Bible Tho shall take out garbage
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Strange... Seems every idiot throughout history has claimed intellectual superiority to God. And blame their wives for their failures... Gen 3; 12- The man said, “The woman you put here with me—she gave me some fruit from the tree, and I ate it.”
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I'm not blaming my wifes , It took that many to figure it out, and thru some humor in , cuz marriage is comedy central. God was never married , how would he know anything ? more humor. Take out the garbage , Don't you know I created the universe? I don't care. Think your hot stuff , I'm not impressed. You think he married a 10 ? hard to say . that all night bar hopping has to stop , you have to work on Sunday
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I'm not blaming my wifes , It took that many to figure it out, and thru some humor in , cuz marriage is comedy central. God was never married , how would he know anything ? more humor. Take out the garbage , Don't you know I created the universe? I don't care. Think your hot stuff , I'm not impressed. You think he married a 10 ? hard to say . that all night bar hopping has to stop , you have work on Sunday George Carlin is dead, Frankentard... So is Elvis. You're not funny. You're just another "Muse" troll with a hard-on for Christians. https://www.musesongwriters.com/forums/index.php?/topic/85865-lifes-a-burning-building/I hope Satan plants a pine-tree up your ass every day in Hell.
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What...? Satan... pine-tree... your old stupid ass...? THAT'S FUK'N HILARIOUS!
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What was the guy on blasphemy ? Was he in born in 1267 and still believe in burning witches at the stake also ?
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What was the guy on blasphemy ? Was in born in 1267 and still believe in burning witches also ? Your inner Dom is beginning to show... Frankentard https://www.musesongwriters.com/forums/index.php?/topic/85865-lifes-a-burning-building/
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Stupid monkeys pump them selves with chemicals when they die , so they look good in a pine box. The only one who will see them is a curious gopher. The Devil is quite popular with 8 billion people . Love me like the devil tonight. For some reason he also likes muffler shops . The Devils muffler shop , buy one get one free , Cuz the bullshit he's selling you that first one will wear out in one year. I'm not like Dom , Dom has been telling us I'm going in a studio for 20 years now, So far all he does is push buttons. Well I'm out of jokes , guess its a movie and bacon and eggs
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Stupid monkeys pump them selves with chemicals.... George Carlin is dead, Frankentard... So is Elvis. And,,,You're STILL Not Funny. You're just another "Muse" troll with a hard-on for Christians. That's why the smoke rising from Hell smells like burning faggot flags, hair dye, Ozempic, and anal lube! https://www.musesongwriters.com/forums/index.php?/topic/85865-lifes-a-burning-building/Only retards place faith in evolution.... Somebody should stop stupid monkeys from voting. Any monkey without an ID should be deported. Devolved German chimps should be sterilized. Apes shouldn't be allowed to perform at the Superbowl, and Californian Frankentards belong in the San Diego zoo! YOU'RE THE REASON WHY (A I) IS MAKING EVERYONE SICK!Only a retarded monkey would call what you're doing "MUSIC". I hope Satan plants a pine-tree up your ass every day in Hell... And "Comedy Central" can BLOW ME! (now THAT'S funny!)
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Logical speaking the gopher would need a drill for a peep hole , I don't think Home Depot is 6 feet under
IRS. International rip you off society
They're still offended on the Boston tea party
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I accidentally deleted Fdemetrio's post. Sorry. I did purposely deleted JAPOV's post because it had absolutely nothing about this topic.
John Now THAT'S irony! But, I'm really not fuk'n surprised...
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When the restraining Spirit is "taken away" and the seven years of tribulation begin, there will be no doubt that God the Messiah is about to return. Don't be fooled by any man who speaks in the name of false gods...
God bless Israel and the USA.
2 Thessalonians 2, 9-12
The coming of the lawless one will be in accordance with Satan's own self destructive works. He will display his power through false signs and wonders that only deceive the lost. He will serve wickedness and glorify the lie that causes many to perish. They perish because they refused to love the truth and so be saved. For this reason, God gives them over to powerful delusion so that they will be fooled and believe the lie. All who reject the truth and delight in wickedness will be condemned.
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Then the prince shows up kisses SnowWhite and we all live happily ever after.
The wolf huffed and puffed but could not blow the piggy house down
Just pulling your chain Tony
Going to war over my fairy tale is better than your fairytale , Stupid caveman. Trump could not run the DMV. So he bangs a teenager so its bombs away ?
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https://suno.com/song/a4cec9dd-7e9f-4b84-bfaf-bb1a66fb2526Jesus Will Have to Email Me Verse 1 If the sky falls tomorrow morning And the angels hit “send all” If the trumpet sounds at midnight And the saints get the call Don’t expect me to see the headlines Or the breaking scroll on TV I don’t keep up with the madness Of what the world’s supposed to be Chorus Jesus will have to email me He never watches the news you see No cable shows in eternity No anchors selling misery If the world ends suddenly Jesus will have to email me Verse 2 They say the end times are trending Every other Tuesday night Some preacher on a podcast Saying judgment’s in sight But heaven ain’t subscribed To every rumor that we start God’s got bigger things to manage Than the panic in our hearts Chorus Jesus will have to email me He never watches the news you see No cable shows in eternity No anchors selling misery If the world ends suddenly Jesus will have to email me Bridge Maybe Gabriel’s got Wi-Fi Up there past the clouds Maybe heaven’s quiet office Far away from shouting crowds No politics, no headlines No breaking tragedy Just a simple message saying “Son, it’s time to come with Me” Final Chorus Jesus will have to email me He never watches the news you see No fear channels on eternity No panic running free If heaven needs to reach old me Jesus will have to email me
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https://suno.com/song/a4cec9dd-7e9f-4b84-bfaf-bb1a66fb2526Jesus Will Have to Email Me Verse 1 If the sky falls tomorrow morning And the angels hit “send all” If the trumpet sounds at midnight And the saints get the call Don’t expect me to see the headlines Or the breaking scroll on TV I don’t keep up with the madness Of what the world’s supposed to be Chorus (6 lines) Jesus will have to email me He never watches the news you see No cable shows in eternity No anchors selling misery If the world ends suddenly Jesus will have to email me Verse 2 They say the end times are trending Every other Tuesday night Some preacher on a podcast Saying judgment’s in sight But heaven ain’t subscribed To every rumor that we start God’s got bigger things to manage Than the panic in our hearts Chorus Jesus will have to email me He never watches the news you see No cable shows in eternity No anchors selling misery If the world ends suddenly Jesus will have to email me Bridge Maybe Gabriel’s got Wi-Fi Up there past the clouds Maybe heaven’s quiet office Far away from shouting crowds No politics, no headlines No breaking tragedy Just a simple message saying “Son, it’s time to come with Me” Final Chorus Jesus will have to email me He never watches the news you see No fear channels on eternity No panic running free If heaven needs to reach old me Jesus will have to email me Everybody knows you're already deluded Frank... Seriously, why don't you just start your own "Frank's Fairytales and Philosophies" thread? You should be able to keep that going till Kingdom Come. If you don't, you know I will...
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