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WHEN?
by JAPOV - 03/04/26 08:56 AM
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I have not written anything....ever! This is no exception! lol. Just a noodle thing based loosely on not fitting in , breaking rules in a new place resulting in banishment to ...Siberia haha. not serious . just some fun.
any and all add-ons...begged for! haha Feb 5 updated, w Dave Gill suggestions
Bill
Intro
Siberia, Siberia
Siberia, Siberia
verse 1
How did I get here?
What exactly did I do?
A lesson's to be learned , no doubt
As a greenie, "I Be New"
verse 1
How I ended here
I've no flipping clue
A lesson learned , no doubt
For the greenie, "He Be New"
prechorus
Comrade, Hey Buddy, a little vacation?
You will like your new location
chorus
Soooooooooooo
When in Siberia do
Do as the natives locals do
But
Why here , seems so mean I've had a revelation
So I am
Working my way back
Working my way back
Back to the main stream
Back to civilization
verse 2
Square peg in the round
Trying to fit in
But Gee with all these rules
I'm Coming up a little thin
bridge
The streets are barren
The light lum low
The night crawls slow
and gloomy
I trip tumble roads
With tamped down spirit
I need to ferret
This tomb free
Some vacation.
I need civilization!
chorus
Tag
Main stream being civil, is where its at
There is no question of that
Last edited by Bill Draper; 02/05/26 02:49 PM.
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Hmm....just reading that over....I think I need it to be clearer in my chorus that I am now in Siberia......
and also I should have 3 more prechorus sections since I sing the chorus 3 times? all should be different?
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Hey Bill!
I'll take a stab here with a thought or two...
How did I get here?
What exactly did I do?
A lesson's to be learned , no doubt
As a greenie, "I Be New"
Comrade, a little vacation? <--- I'm not feeling "comrade" here. Although I think I get the reference.
You will like your new location
Soooooooooooo
When in Siberia do
Do as the locals do
But
I've had a revelation
So I am
Working my way back
Working my way back
Back to civilization
Something like that anyways...
As always, KoS.
Peace,
Dave
"Where there's a Gill, there's a way"
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Hey Dave. I like the changes! My lyric writing is primitive…haha.
Bill
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Being shunned by institution is like a hot coat in summer. Shrug out of it and be cool.
And keep writing, I tell myself. From this am, came: (re syberia.)
The streets are barren
The light lum low
The night crawls slow
and gloomy
I trip tumble roads
With tamped down spirit
I need to ferret
This tomb free
Some vacation.
I need civilization!
Could this be a bridge???
Last edited by Bill Draper; 02/05/26 02:52 PM.
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Last edited by Bill Draper; 02/06/26 01:23 AM.
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HAHAHAHA!!!! BILL!!! YES!! THIS IS AWESOME!!
I love the swing-blues genre you selected for this! Did not see that coming!
Well done! Well done, indeed, sir!!
Peace,
Dave
"Where there's a Gill, there's a way"
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Psybeeria... lol 
DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME HERE... CANCEL CULTURE IS ALIVE AND WELL @JPF!
YOU'LL NEVER KNOW WHAT'S ALREADY BEEN DELETED...
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HAHAHAHA!!!! BILL!!! YES!! THIS IS AWESOME!!
I love the swing-blues genre you selected for this! Did not see that coming!
Well done! Well done, indeed, sir!!
Peace,
Dave Thanks for your help with this David. Part of the prompt was bluegrass punk…..so the Robbys throw in that high muted banjo thing that skirts the snare like wow!
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