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This is what a 60y/o, flesh and blood, songwriter/musician, stripped down (to his skivvies) and just jamming... sounds like recording in his living-room.

And, no, I don't care what any of you "Artificial Idiots" think of my lyrics!

I kept it short,
ENJOY

https://soundclick.com/song/15180035

Then why do you post it since 99% of songs on here are AI ? Calling everyone idiots , Guess you will never change. Just don't be a cunte ? is that what you said ?


Lovely

"Sniff, sniff"... I smell smoke from the MUSE again...

I hate when they burn their trash...

Smells like rainbow flags and pigshit!

https://www.musesongwriters.com/forums/index.php?/topic/85865-lifes-a-burning-building/

Yup , Well I tried , You won't change . oh well

Yep', Elvis has been dead for a long time, Frank...

the groove is really cool, theres not enough change between verse and pre chorus,

the hoot me burn me stab me part should be over a sustained chord, not the sticcato your doin in the verses.

go a step higher there and hold the chord let it ring out, add some drama to it

Hmmmmn... a sustain chord?

In the original acoustic "phone-rough" I played along with rhythmic accents of the lyrics. Perhaps I should have stayed with that lol...

Tune your guitar, show me what you're talking about

can be a sus chord, but i meant to sustain it, your cutting out a rhtym in the verses, when you cam to that part, hold the chord.

maybe i can do it on ai, im too lazy to play the guitar right now, and have been. ive lost my chops due to inactivity

too much sex instead.

Yeah', right... where do you find the time...?
None of us are getting laid, WE'RE ALWAYS HERE!

Thank God , You might need to get laid , I've never seen a more pissed off person than you

Just imagine if I were a non-binary pansexual libtard and got pregnant...

You should have children , Your a role model like mister rogers. your empathy for your fellow man is astounding

Empathy is not a prerequisite for logical common sense, Frank.

Go litter your own yard with crap!
https://www.musesongwriters.com/forums/index.php?/topic/85865-lifes-a-burning-building/

Yes, empathy and common sense are deeply linked, as empathy (understanding others' feelings/perspectives) provides crucial social common sense, helping us navigate human behavior and make practical decisions in social situations, while some argue pure "common sense" (practical judgment) can sometimes conflict with empathy's emotional pull, but cognitive empathy (perspective-taking) is key to many "common sense" social judgments.

Exactly.
"Not a prerequisite".
Perhaps you should tell your AI to speak English for Californians...

OR,
Just understand and accept that I generally don't care how I make internet trolls from the MUSE "feel".

https://www.musesongwriters.com/forums/index.php?/topic/85865-lifes-a-burning-building/

Actually its quiet right, I was curious what you said , Its a mix of common sense and empathy. Both of these fail alot in business when $ are on the line

There's no money in songwriting, Frank...

If there is, it's only shared among very few thieves.

https://www.musesongwriters.com/forums/index.php?/topic/85865-lifes-a-burning-building/

Just a reminder that REAL musicians still exist, and actual performers deserve their own forum!


https://soundclick.com/song/15180035

Oh there's lots of money in music , were just to old to be one of the thieves

Lol... "Old Money" and politics!
"Organic" talent is just a distraction for the ignorant 95%.

Despite being a "plug-n-play one-off" from my couch...
I actually put a lot of effort into my mixing/mastering.
The rest is just natural ability

https://soundclick.com/song/15180035

It must take so much energy to be that angry all the time, I would be exhausted. whewww I sure hope you live alone.

Actually anger is s key ingredient in rock music

I guess they only have one thought in their head 24 hours a day then. ok rock on. I write other kinds of songs, it's ok. I wasn't talking about his "music" I was talking about screaming on a silly website forum for no reason.

Devotion and Practice, princess... Practice, Practice, Practice.

Actually I work 16 hours a day with a heart operation coming . and take 7 hours to write one a day . Like I mentioned several times , if the songs any good then its live tracks and studios . Now let me take some pain pills from this full tear Rotary Cuff and call my men and tell them you [naughty word removed] this job up , Your in big trouble. The sooner you realize everything above the stars and below is comedy central like God and snakes , the better off you'll be. Tho shall marry a women 37 years younger then you. WTF are you sure ? Yeah I'm sure. She never heard of James Taylor . Well get used to BS tik Tok pop shite . Well ok

Some songs come in ten minutes, I've written many while l Iogged here with the thread started waiting for something to put in it.

Other songs I've been tinkering woth for years, csnt fin d a direction to go with, cant find a way tonyh r hook or outbof it, cant think if a bridge. I don't know if I should feed those to Suno.

But im all onstryijg a woman 38 years younger
Im able to attract them, but the lies needed to finish the deal are pretty substantial lollllllllll

Ha Ha Ha will takes 4 marriages to finally figure out the bs that works . But I would not recommend it , Their Quick . better buy some Nikes

Sounds to me like you blame God because EVERYBODY takes your money!

"Render unto Cæsar the things that are Cæsar's..."

Samson and Delilah ring any bells?

Lol... Dude, do you blame God for being so STUPID!?

I don't blame anyone for anything , I'm actually having a pretty good time. I like working and staying busy. You want some chicken feet ? , nope that looks disgusting.

But there are some stupid monkeys . The smart ones work 16 hours a day , the stupid ones believe in fairy tales

https://suno.com/song/0d9283ab-f8a7-4f50-844f-52d76e65a4c2





Verse 1

I seen men bet their lives on a crooked smile,

Loaded dice and a bad last mile.

Heard ‘em laugh like luck was tame,

Till the devil came to collect their name.

You can drink all night, you can talk real loud,

But truth don’t bend to the toughest crowd.

Every jungle’s got teeth and vines,

And only some learn the warning signs.

Pre-Chorus

You can blame the world, you can curse the rain,

But rules don’t change just ‘cause you complain.

Chorus (Hook)

The smart monkeys survive, the stupid ones die,

That’s the law of the jungle, no alibi.

No saviors coming, no second try,

The smart monkeys survive, the stupid ones die.

Verse 2

I watched a king swing too damn fast,

Thought he’d outrun his shadowed past.

Chest out proud, mind shut tight,

Didn’t see the trap till it snapped shut right.

Wisdom whispers, fools just shout,

One reads the room, one storms out.

A loaded gun don’t care who’s right,

And daylight don’t forgive the night.

Pre-Chorus

You can roll them bones, you can tempt that flame,

But gravity don’t forget your name.

Chorus (Hook)

The smart monkeys survive, the stupid ones die,

That’s the law of the jungle, no alibi.

No mercy clause, no reason why,

The smart monkeys survive, the stupid ones die.

Bridge

It ain’t about money, muscle, or pride,

It’s knowing when to run, when to hide.

Some learn scars, some learn graves,

Some write checks, some get paid.

Verse 3

I ain’t holy, I ain’t clean,

Just learned to read what ain’t unseen.

I count my steps, I watch my back,

I don’t chase glory down a crack.

Still breathing means I listened once,

When instinct spoke instead of hunch.

You don’t win wars by proving you’re brave,

You win by staying out the grave.

Final Chorus (Double Hook)

The smart monkeys survive, the stupid ones die,

That’s the truth carved sharp, no lullaby.

Say it slow, let it burn your pride—

The smart monkeys survive…

The stupid ones die.

Outro

Yeah, the jungle keeps score

Every damn time.

Correct , And stupid monkeys believe in fairy tales. Well it is 2026 we have some smart monkeys , But if you look around evolution didn't quiet fix every monkey , Cuz we still have stupid ones. For some reason most reside in Washington DC. Must be the weather

I know, right??
Somebody should stop stupid monkeys from voting.
Any monkey without an ID should be deported.
Devolved German chimps should be sterilized.
Apes shouldn't be allowed to perform at the Superbowl,
and Californian Frankentards belong in the San Diego zoo!

Well at least you agree we evolved from monkeys and not some grand wizard in the sky . Never liked Zoos always felt sorry for them like animals in prison , Fuking humans need to put animals on display. I like when they escape and kill ten people. We found Tony the Tiger today after he mauled 10 people to death. it was a tragic scene more at 11 from Zoo keeper Debbie. Well I believe animals should be in prison so 10 years old can throw rocks at lions , Thanks Debbie Your a fucing idiot


Well you don't believe in monkeys . You believe Adam and Eve had sex , Then all their kids had sex together , The first sign of incest
Then God killed all them because of orgies . And the 6 people on that boat, or whatever the number , and every known species of animals , once they landed all had sex , the 2nd sign of incest . And now we're at 8 billion people at 2026. And thats why we call each other brothers and Sisters , cuz of incest. Cuz basically we're all related.

Ok Judgment comes and he tells you , You did not believe the start of mankind and incest . Or you say yes I did . And try not to be hypocrite before that day comes like every religion on the planet .

To get a better understanding of religion and evolution I'm doing a job for a professor at ST Marys College , Well he quit and opening a gym , that we are doing .

But this guy with PHD is human behavior , must have a great understanding on all that. How much did someone spend on his eduction ? So he quits after 10 years and said he hated it .