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https://soundcloud.com/carroll-kiphen/she-loves-me-she-loves-me-notJase Leow music and vocals/ Carroll Kiphen lyrics She loves me, she loves me not Verse It’s back and forth, to and fro. I’m a yoyo on her string. Has me at her beck and call. Waiting for the phone to ring. Chorus She loves me, she loves me not Which one will it be? The green for go, red for no Will she stay or leave? She loves me, she loves me not What should I believe? Verse It’s off it’s on, hot and cold. Keeps me guessing her next move. Plays a game of tug of war. With me and another dude. Chorus She loves me, she loves me not Which one will it be? The green for go, red for no Will she stay or leave? She loves me, she loves me not What should I believe? Bridge I figure that I’ll pop the question. Hold her to yes or no. Better a broken heart than wonder. Should I stay, should I go? Chorus She loves me, she loves me not Which one will it be? The green for go, red for no Will she stay or leave? She loves me, she loves me not What should I believe?
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Carroll,
Nice contemporary pop sound and feel to this—Jase did a great job. He made some nice choices on the lyric changes, playing up the “She loves me, she loves me not hook” really well. Totally 80’s pop for me—well done!
Kind regards,
Deej
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Hey Carroll,
Definitely 80's sound for sure. I'd prefer hearing a little less reverb on the vocals and the disco drum beat brought down about 2 db. since the 80's are over. This would bring the vocals up slightly and more prominent--JMO. The outro solo a bit vanilla, which could be enhanced IMO. I really like the melody and performance which is standard for you--enjoyed the song!
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Appreciate the feedback Eddie. Thanks
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Hi Carroll
A good pop song something different which is always welcome
Best of luck with it for all concerned
Regards
John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Nice retro pop song guys! Love the percussion and the way the melody changes up in the chorus - really gives it a lift  Reminds me of Hall and Oats. Yeah - maybe back off the reverb a bit would be good advice. No other nits from me though. cheers Paul
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Sounds a little like Donald Fagan Carroll. A nice pleasant ballad, well written, sung and priduced
Yes good song
John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Great 80's tune. Loved it!
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Appreciate the kind words guys.
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Love it and it reminds me very much of Chicago. On that basis some brass would just set this on fire I think. In either case a lovely listen. Best,
Gerry
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