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TV Drama
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/26/26 03:19 PM
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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 08/26/26 12:29 AM
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Wendy Woo
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John Eddy
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SHINE
by Rob B. - 08/20/26 02:34 PM
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Hi Stan I'm so pleased your back on the boards, and I replaced the chorus in the original post. I believe the listener will catch on to the "You're the HOOK in My SONG". I did speak to Rodney about it today, Yep, Rodney will nail the music for this, no doubt in my mind.  Rodney is looking forward to working on this, and so am I. I know from experience, lyrics do change at times when producing, those final touches, that brings it all together.  We will wait and see what others say Stan, and go from their. When Rodney does start the music for this, then we will tweak it, and take into consideration what others have mentioned too. Yes I agree in keeping it simple, Bouncy, Catchy, that no doubt by the end of the song, the listener will get it hey. G'Mornin' Mz M!
Shayne always has GREAT Sugs...&, I'll leave it up to You to KOS 'Em... (Don't shoot me, I'm only the CoWriter..heh-heh!)
I'm in-favor of keeping-it-simple..think Rodney's Guitar would be better than a Sung-Bridge..but again, this is Your Song/I'm the Backup Man here, & when You're Happy with the Finished Product, I'm Happy!
I've re-penned The CHORUS this AM...
See if it works better/KOS too!
Every Time I Sit Down To
Pen Another Song You
Inspire Me..So I Can't..Go Wrong...
Lyrics Fill with Tender Meaning
Whenever You Set My Heart Beating
& After I've Penned-It..
The LOVE..SINGS..ON...
When YOU'RE THE HOOK..IN MY SONG
KOS, M'LadyChum!!! We're gettin'-there!
Best Wishes & Big Hugs,
Stan
PS: I'll admit, "Hook" IS a wee-bitta SongwriterSpeak... But, I first heard The Term about 30 Years Ago...think a Majority of The Listeners HAVE heard of that term By Now. Even if they Haven't, I think this'n's Catchy-Enough that those who Don't Know could instantly Google It these days & Find-Out.
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