G'Mornin' Mz M!

Shayne always has GREAT Sugs...&, I'll leave it up to You to KOS 'Em... (Don't shoot me, I'm only the CoWriter..heh-heh!)

I'm in-favor of keeping-it-simple..think Rodney's Guitar would be better than a Sung-Bridge..but again, this is Your Song/I'm the Backup Man here, & when You're Happy with the Finished Product, I'm Happy!

I've re-penned The CHORUS this AM...
See if it works better/KOS too!

Every Time I Sit Down To
Pen Another Song You
Inspire Me..So I Can't..Go Wrong...
Lyrics Fill with Tender Meaning
Whenever You Set My Heart Beating
& After I've Penned-It..
The LOVE..SINGS..ON...
When YOU'RE THE HOOK..IN MY SONG

KOS, M'LadyChum!!! We're gettin'-there!

Best Wishes & Big Hugs,
Stan

PS: I'll admit, "Hook" IS a wee-bitta SongwriterSpeak... But, I first heard The Term about 30 Years Ago...think a Majority of The Listeners HAVE heard of that term By Now. Even if they Haven't, I think this'n's Catchy-Enough that those who Don't Know could instantly Google It these days & Find-Out.

Last edited by "Tampa Stan" Good; 11/21/12 03:28 PM.