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by JAPOV - 04/27/26 10:49 AM
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WHEN?
by JAPOV - 04/23/26 11:28 PM
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Joined: May 2009
Posts: 2,067
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Hey Michelle and Stan,
When I critique lyrics, I look for things that are not necessary
to the meaning of the lyric or repeated words that can be strengthened.
Stan knows I'm big on condensing.
Tweaks/comments below, keep or sweep  YOU'RE the HOOK in MY SONG! (Before I became a songwriter, I had never heard the term "hook" as a repetitive part of a song that reels you in. So I wonder...will this "hook" appeal to the average public who are not songwriters?) (VERSE) I Love..A Catchy Melody I Love some Harmony.. Your Buzz...Lasts Me All-Night- Long!( Not needed for the meaning, only for the rhyme) I Hear..Wonderful Words that Come-to-Me It Must be My Destiny..When... YOU'RE THE HOOK IN MY SONG... (VERSE) I Believe Our Love's a Certainty Feels Like It'll Always-Be I Feel.. Deep-Emotions run through me SO-Strong! Gotta Write It Rapidly I Hear..The Sweetest Tune in History..'Cuz.. YOU'RE THE HOOK IN MY SONG...
“I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase.” - Harlan Howard
Co-writing = Compromise!
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