Cool, Nikki! I can feel a lot of angst in this. Very hip lyrics. Of course I'd have to hear the music to tell for sure, but It sounds like a cool Alannis Morrisette, Natalie Imbruglia, or even Avril Lavigne song. I like the disjointed, fragmented thought processes conveyed here. Like the thoughts are coming straight through unchecked by rational thinking. Not an insult to you, but a compliment to the ability to convey betrayal and anger. I don't know how to write like this, I'm much more boring and I've never had a lot of angst, but I like the lyrics, I think they're a keeper!

Thanks for sharing,

Steve