Hey Bluesriff,
Two things, keep or sweep smile
(1) The title. I know some will say it doesn't matter since a title cannot be copyrighted... but the Eagles had a big hit with the same. The title is the first thing a publisher knows about your song. If it looks familiar, he or she may not even take the time to pop in your CD for a listen.
(2) In your first verse, mention that you are on the Internet to set up the story better.


“I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase.” - Harlan Howard

Co-writing = Compromise!