Mike I gotta tell ya, man.. this one grates on me a bit. The storyline seems rushed. A couple falls madly in love with each other in just a few hours at a bar but in reality he wasn't ready for (another?) long term relationship due to a previous one (gone bad, I assume?) but mentions it being his first time (in a place like this).

Ugh. I'm sorry... I really don't wish to pick this apart too much. I guess I'm just in a bad mood. Forgive me.

For me, reading this as it is leaves me with the feeling that the pieces don't quite fit right.

1. Man and woman meet
2. Man and woman fall madly in love
3. Man is not emotionally ready for the relationship (immature?)
4. Woman leaves man due to #3 with no chance for reconciliation

I'm gonna think on this some more and get back to you. Sorry for the rambling.

Peace,

Dave

"Where there's a Gill, there's a way"