I love everything except the chorus. The first verse makes me believe it's a face to face meeting but the chorus says its online. I really like the verses. If I were to have written it, I wouldn't mdkevit a waltz to start with if I'm including Internet dating. Second, I would make it about Internet dating and then have him imagining the first real meeting in the chorus. Probably wouldn't have it dnd with being blocked though. Got to have hope us what I'm told.


Caroline


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