Thanks Caroline, Appreciate the time.....I was trying to be like Tarentino (in retrospect, of course, and no pun intended) and allow my first verse to be the culmination of the chorus......does that not work? I am not trying to confuse the audience, I am simply saying I am "already gone" (infatuated) before their first face to face.....too baffling? Ok I'll scrap the feeble attempt to instill a two step into this quasi-country tune.
Ha.
Can I really explain this away? Ha ha
Help, Caroline!

bluesey


Write on, Man,
Michael W. Brown, f.k.a. "bluesriff"

"The best way to find yourself is to lose yourself in the service of others."
Mahatma Gandhi