Tracy,

Very nice song.

I am from Pittsburgh and know what you are talking about, we called it "blood sisters/brothers", I didn't know that until you posted about it. It would be nice to clarify the lyrics, but when the song itself is really good, sometimes that can pass, but if YOU wanted to create a more emotional connection for the listener, changes to the title/lyric would be the way to go.

It is long, but it is a good listen and it doesn't "seem" long to the listener.

Great vocal, reminds me of the Cranberries...

and welcome to JPF.

Tammy


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