Gary,
Thanks for the in depth review, although I have to admit that it was all a little over my head. But I did ask for feedback! All the songs that I have written have purely just been for fun. Five years ago I did not even know what a hook or a bridge was. I started playing guitar three years ago and never gave an ounce of thought as to whether I might hear one of my songs on the radio someday. That being said, maybe I will take a different approach going forward just to see what I come up with. You have sufficiently outlined the proper song structure. Whether or not I can make that happen is another story!! Not sure whether you liked the song or not smile