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Bayside
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 10:48 PM
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Joined: Apr 2001
Posts: 6,578
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Good job on the singing and playing. Lyric-wise and story-wise, a little vague in places--the blood line for one as mentioned. Need to remember "You" know the story, "We" don't. Someone mentioned "Crowded" --I'd agree. Some of your long lines sound "squished" trying to get them to fit in. A little condensing-- cutting out a few words ,would be in order IMO. O K, I'm not an easy critiquer  One doesn't learn anything from "Backpatting" All Just my opinion of course. Overall, I like it As someone said, seems Celtic influenced ? Carry on Wy (Oh, yeah, Folks might have trouble remembering the title.I think it's only mentioned once and that not even in the C
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