Hi Dan.
I really like this song. The words are very good BUT…
Just a couple of ideas I will pass your way IMO.

I hope you dont mind me playing just a tad with your words...

KOS

God Bless Roy

I been around this great big land
I’ve been around is a stationary statement..if you know what I mean…
I'm never in one place.. this statement can’t exist… you can only be in one place…
So maybe:

From Boston Massachusetts
To the North Pacific Shore
I’ve traveled round this great land
And I’ll be doing it some more.
I’ve felt the wind, the burning sun, the rain upon my face
I rode the rails I walked the roads, never stayed long in one place

DOING FINE - GOT NOTHING ON MY MIND
DOING FINE - JUST WATCHING LIFE GO BY

WATCHING LIFE GO BY

Drank moonshine in Kentucky, even courted a Cajun queen
I walked around the shady side of many city streets
I gambled in St. Louie, I fought in Abilene
I slept out cold in Central Park, and couldn’t afford to eat

Chorus:

Someday I'll go to Jesus, but maybe not today
I thought one day I'll settle down but I'm not made that way
until the final curtain, I will travel round
I hear that whistle blowing, now I'm heading out of town

Chorus

Last edited by OskaSeason; 03/06/10 03:28 AM.
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