Dan,

Sorry you've been having health issues but glad you are better. I thought this was very nice. I liked Colin's suggestion of adding harmony to your chorus. If you want me to give it a try, I could. I also think Matt had some good thoughts on your lyric, just to give it a tad more detail. I like that the hobo describes the places he's seen and the hardships of the lifestyle but then comes back with "nothing on my mind." That's a nice touch. Obviously, some of those things would stick with a person so I like the contrast of that message.