That is a GREAT Song Concept and an Outstanding HOOK:

This is one VERY SERIOUS LINE !!!

And I hope, you don’t mind, a little more Steam

I think you're really on to something GREAT Here. It needs to be reworked in some areas but I'm hearing some Kick-Ass Music for that one ... Kinda Like the song Chrome that Trace Adkins sang.

Thank You for Sharing

David


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