I thought it was good overall melody and lyrics. One part of the production bothered me. The guitar that carried a riff throughout seemed to be fighting against the song. It seemed to come in indiscriminately and by the end of the song I was just wishing it would go away. It didn't have a very good tone anyway. Am I the only one hearing that?

I thought the vocal was a good match for the song. If I heard the song in a movie about a breakup, I think it would fit right in. Playing the devils advocate, I don't think the song is ambitious enough or edgy enough to be a single. Still, well done.

"Imagination is more important than knowledge." - Albert Einstein