Hi,

So sorry I missed this one. What a great idea to help out the fledgling, strugling songwriters like me.

So Tampa, what are you doing critiquing this one. You're one a the pros!

Hopefully there's a next one and I'll actually click on the thread title in time to practice. Don't have time today to try and add anything (if there's even anything to add). Just wanted to say I like the concept of what you did here.

When a new member joins I'm always afraid to say too much. For one thing---I may very well be totally off track with my critique and I have no idea what kind of person they are. So, again, great idea.

vanessa