Well i'm new here and maybe not a good person to go over other's work,

When I was just a young boy,
I used to hear my dad,
Tell me thing to help my life, ?thing? things maybe
From turning to the bad,

But line 3 make's no sence what so ever to me i could be wrong.
but on a good note you can always send it to paramount group they will do you a good demo so i hear.

Not that you need one mike
All the best steve

[This message has been edited by Stephen (edited 06-20-2006).]