Got a funny story about those linebreaks, Pete. This may be a legend, I'll ask Hugh Moffat next time I see him.

An old friend, the late Ralph Whiteway, showed a song to Hugh. Hugh told him he shouldn't carry a thought over to another line. Ralph reiminded Hugh of Hugh's big hit "Old Flames Can't Hold a Candle to You." which started:

Downtown tonight, I met an old friend someone who,
I used to take comfort from long before I met you.

Funny, but yes, that's one of the mistakes in this. There'a a bunch more. Probably a bunch I don't know of myself.

Keep at it.

Mike

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You have to practice improvisation. -Art Tatum

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You've got to know your limitations. I don't know what your limitations are. I found out what mine were when I was twelve. I found out that there weren't too many limitations, if I did it my way. -Johnny Cash

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