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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Apr 2001
Posts: 8,574
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When I was just a young boy, I used to hear my dad, Tell me thing to help my life, From turning to the bad, I used to hate to hear it, But now I know, you see, How good was my Daddy's advice to me. My Daddy's advice to me Was as good as it could be When I was young I hated it But now I'm 23 And I love Daddy's advice to me Now he's sick and old, His lips are growing cold, I can no longer ride upon his back, So though we're far away We write this letter to say, He's the man who we should thank Chorus Bridge My life is good, I live as I should, The world is hard, But like the bard, Of Avon or of even Old Spice, I listen to my Daddy's advice Chorus This song shares a lot with some modern country songs, but it's awful. Why? What are some of the things wrong with this? What could make it better? Not for Bobbie or any of the "pros" to critique ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/wink.gif) ------------------ You have to practice improvisation. -Art Tatum Mike Dunbar Music [This message has been edited by Mike Dunbar (edited 06-16-2006).]
You've got to know your limitations. I don't know what your limitations are. I found out what mine were when I was twelve. I found out that there weren't too many limitations, if I did it my way. -Johnny Cash It's only music. -niteshift Mike Dunbar Music
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