One more little suggestion and I promise I will shut up
I never talk this much, ask anyone on the board lol

IF you change your last chorus maybe you could change a couple words in the first verses to set it up....
Example
Back in sixty nine WE didn't have a care
Before they called OUR number WE chopped off all OUR hair
Said goodby to Mama,Dad and Uncle Dan
Boarded OUR FIRST PLANE and headed off to Nam

verse 3
IT'S BEEN THIRTY YEARS, SINCE I WHEELED BOBBY FROM THAT PLANE
BUT the nightmares............

verse 4
BOBBY Finaly called it quits.......

I think joining using the buddy system which alot of my friend did and putting in a couple names (you can change them to anything that suits you) makes it a little more personal.


anyway hope these little suggestions help
big hugs, Willie


[This message has been edited by TxBrownEyedBlond (edited 07-01-2005).]