hi and welcome to the JPF. I instantly recognized the title from the DI's chant in Full Metal Jacket, haha.

but the lyric itself...it's by no means bad. the only thing I can say is the ground has been covered before. hell, I've written more than my share. the key is to approach the topic of the messed up Viet vet in a fresh way which I think is kinda lacking here. still a good and sincere effort, though. [Linked Image]


Nashville demos etc:

https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=431939

other demos:

https://soundcloud.com/wabash-cannibal

Amazon Kindle books by Robert George you may enjoy:

1) Americana

2) Teenage Graceland

3) The Will to Be

4) Fort Mystery

5) Wheel Sea

6) My One True Love