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RT .23
by bennash - 05/17/26 03:00 PM
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Joined: Sep 2004
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Hi Mark,
I graduated from high school in 1969
and have my share of Vietnam memories.
My first reaction when I read this was a cringe at the rhyming of Dan and Nam! The last syllable of Vietnam rhymes with bomb not bam.
I also feel like there is something missing.
You explained the lyric as being one that
you wrote about a Vet whose life was changed
by the war, but you didn't explain in the lyric what caused the change.
Good or bad, you drew a critique from one
of the best--something most of us don't get.
Diane
Diane Ewing
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