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by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 09:48 PM
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Bobbie
Anthony's suggestion is good one but for another reason.
Theye're are no hard fast rules in composition however 3 Verse's before a chorus usually sounds out of sync.Patterns work better in combinations of 2 then move on.
the 3rd stanza could have been a lift but you don't do the same thing after the 1 Chorus. I'd seriously reconsider this.
BP
[This message has been edited by Butchybob (edited 11-08-2004).]
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