Hi Bobbie,

Very poignant, very real!

A chorus option, but it's fine the way it is:

CHORUS:
Cause you were there
In that moment
In that "isolated" space
You were there
In the fragrance
That "tenderly" touched my face
You were there

(or brushed my face?)

I'd start the next verse:
I wanted to tell *A* stranger . . .

and in those two verses 3 & 4
make that definitive stranger less important, or eliminate any "specific" stranger altogether. . . so as not to distract, because the intensity of the 1st chorus takes the story to a new level.

Make sense?

So verses 3 & 4 material
would start with something like:

I wanted to tell any stranger. . .
How much that moment meant
How precious was his love
How missed the time we spent

And the next verse (4) . . .continuing to defining the "you" of "you were there",
to make the next chorus run even more
effective than the first.

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Terry