Howdy Anthony,

Just when you think a lyric has finished its run...someone else reads it! ;D Thank you so much for taking time to check it out and share your suggestions for improving it. I appreciate that..and will sure consider losing that first verse when it comes music time. I want to see what happens time-wise with this..since the verse lines are short and will end up being sort of staccato sounding (to reinforce the hurried, busy scenario)...then will swell to a slower, more powerful chorus. As a result, this may move along pretty quickly so I may want to keep that first verse in there. Even though the second and third verses might well stand alone, I think the first one provides some of the reason for the feeling...so I'd like to keep it if possible.

Thanks again for the read and remarks!

Hugs,
Bobbie

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