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Bridge took it somewhere else , works for me , I'm not a fan of the word aglow
Thanks, Ben. I'm glad you touched on 'aglow'. I've been uneasy about it myself. Might need to re-think that line.
Not sure, though, what you mean regarding the bridge. Are you saying it works for you or that it takes the lyrical idea somewhere else?
Bridge means taking story somewhere else . its does. people don't say the word aglow , easy fix..Your eyes were burning slow
Okey-doke. I agree, a bridge's function is to take things somewhere else (though still related to the narrative), and I wrote the bridge accordingly. Wanted to add a slight touch of hope with mention of the guy looking to the future.
Country music is conversational language, it's not much on poetry . Though some dance pretty close to it like Kill a word
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Might need to re-think that line. 
