Originally Posted by DonnaMarilyn
Originally Posted by bennash
Bridge took it somewhere else , works for me , I'm not a fan of the word aglow

Thanks, Ben. I'm glad you touched on 'aglow'. I've been uneasy about it myself. wink Might need to re-think that line.

Not sure, though, what you mean regarding the bridge. Are you saying it works for you or that it takes the lyrical idea somewhere else?


Bridge means taking story somewhere else . its does. people don't say the word aglow , easy fix..Your eyes were burning slow

Last edited by bennash; 01/05/26 10:03 AM.

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