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These are just my personal preferences
...I would say “At the corner of
Bad luck and trouble”
“I’m living my life on borrowed time” ... where possible don’t use similes
“The one thing that scares me the most... you don’t need “I think”
Is the feeling I’m losing the light.... you don’t need “that”
Edging too close to my ghost” .... I wouldn’t put “own” in
Excellent writing here
Steve
Last edited by VNORTH2; 05/19/24 09:29 PM.
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