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John's song about a dream reminded me i had one too.

This is a real thing. Ive had a recurring dream since me early 20's. A woman i don't know, shows up, were together , it's mostly seeing her face, and conversation. Some foreplay but nothing overt.

But it's a two sided feeling. The wonder of seeing her, is breathtaking, but then frustration sets in. Cause i will never know who it is.

I cant even tell what she looks like, until the dream starts, then i forget when waking.

I never wrote about, cause its a tough concept.

Wanted the listener to be confused, like whats he talking about, cause that's what it's like for me

The dream can disappear for a year, then every day for week, no pattern.

But it's a lovely dream, while it lasts.

I'm not sure if she has big knockers.

BTW, I've mentioned this to a relative who is a counselor, she tried, but she thinks it probably occurs when certain triggers in waking life make it happen.

Not big on reincarnation but that's been proposed


Anyway, i think it's a nice production and tune


https://soundclick.com/track/15297210

Wow, what a kiss!
You said how's that sir?
I wish I knew who you were

Near perfect miss
Tommorow just a blur
I wish I knew who you were

I'll see you on the flip side of the pillow
The rest of the day the brain turns to brillo
I'll figure this out i don't think so
I'll see you on the flipside of the pillow

You can't be new
Past lives or two
I wish I knew who you were

I don't believe that shitt
Maybe you do
I wish I knew who you were

I'll see you on the flip side of the pillow
The rest of the day the brain turns to brillo
I'll figure this out i don't think so
I'll see you on the flipside of the pillow

I cant remember the face
I can't remember the place
My heart runnin at this pace,
Ah it's bye bye Dom...

I'll see you on the flip side of the pillow
The rest of the day the the brain turns to brillo
I'll figure this out i don't think so
I'll see you on the flipside of the pillow

You captured your feelings in those lyrics. Yes, dreams can be haunting.

Thanks John, it's haunting in the frustration, the dream itself is quite lovely 👍

ok lets go on this dead site . I think this is good

Well, if this site dies, it could come back to life.

Where Did the Music Go?

Verse 1
There was a place where strangers came
To chase a dream, not seek a name
A simple verse, a borrowed rhyme
Could build a friendship over time
We cheered the highs, we learned the lows
We helped each other's music grow
No one cared who stole the show
Back when love outshined the ego

Pre-Chorus
Then somewhere along the way
The harmony got lost
We started building fences
Instead of building songs

Chorus
Where did the music go?
Who turned the hearts to stone?
We used to lift each other higher
Now everybody sings alone
Where did the music go?
Does anybody know?
If we're still writing songs together
Where did the music go?

Verse 2
Then louder voices took the floor
Till no one heard the songs anymore
One by one, the dreamers slipped
Leaving empty coffee cups and scripts
Opinions echoed off the walls
No one caught the silent calls
Funny how the loudest sound
Can leave the quietest hearts unwound

Pre-Chorus
Then somewhere along the way
The harmony got lost
We started building fences
Instead of building songs

Chorus
Where did the music go?
Who turned the hearts to stone?
We used to lift each other higher
Now everybody sings alone
Where did the music go?
Does anybody know?
If we're still writing songs together
Where did the music go?

Bridge
One kind word can change a song
One open heart can right a wrong
Maybe all it takes is you
To bring the music through

Final Chorus
Where did the music go?
Who turned the hearts to stone?
We used to lift each other higher
Now everybody sings alone
Where did the music go?
Does anybody know?
If we're still writing songs together
Where did the music go?

Outro
Where did the music go?

Maybe. Listen to songs . I could care less on religion or politics . Delete them

I remember when rock sounded like this. Sounds like 1972 Birmingham and 1980 LA all wrapped up into one. I like!

I can hear the Police or The clash in this, but I thiught it sounded more like Coldplay.

Yeah it was fun doing it this way, but I'm starting to do my own takes and versions in suno now