Originally Posted by couchgrouch
Hi, Steven. Your title is the best hook I've seen here in ages.

Here is some advice...since the listener can't hear the
Homophone, make a clear, even clichéd reference to "peace" right before the hook. That way the listener will get the hook without seeing the lyric/title. Maybe "peace of mind". Something unmistakable.

Trust me, I've learned this from experience. Pros do the same thing. Should be a simple adjustment.



CG

Thanks for the listen and comment, most appreciated....I get what you’re saying 100% and agree it should be a simple fix...I’ll work on it and get back to you

Steve

Creators of music have a responsibility to their craft. When they have finished using all the notes and words, they must pass them down to the next generation with a simple request. “Use these to create new music.”...Steven McDonald