Originally Posted by Martin Lide
Neil

I think that Cheyenne hit on your basic issue. The primary criteria that defines a song is musicality. Without that it is a poem or a metrical and rhyming something...and not a song.

For a song to be good, it has to have an appealing tune. Bob Dylan and a few others aside, the message, hook etc don't usually don't get considered unless the tune appeals to the listener.

imho...you need to bring more focus to the music side of your songs.

Martin

Thanks Martin I will try to. Actually I am. LOL

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