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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: May 2010
Posts: 4,172 Likes: 8
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Cecilee,
I think I have the same issues, it is a bit long.
I like to write like you do, by liking things to other things...to accomplish that, you must use descriptors to describe and refer to each of the things you are comparing, right now you are not clear on what you are comparing to the rivers. I do know what you intend to do and it is a great thought for a lyric, nice to meet folks that think the way that I like to write.
Nice to see a keyboardist on the boards, we seem guitar heavy here.
Some nice things to work off of in this song...keep going with it!
Tammy
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