Hey Eddie, thanks for listening and commenting. Glad that you see potential in my song too! smile In the arrangement I have been working on, there won't be a pause in between the end of the intro and the start of the first verse. I do agree that I should come in more assertively there. smile

And also I played around with the bpm of my arrangement a little this morning, which was at 108 bpm, about the speed of the Moby song I linked to and the speed that I was playing in the video, and made it a little faster. I did like it a little faster! I noticed that I tend to play my songs slowly on the piano at first until I've practiced them enough that I can play them a little more quickly. tongue And some of the songs I've played on piano, when turned into electronic songs, become more uptempo. smile

Anyway, thanks again for listening and I'll take your advice into account! grin