Hey everyone, I haven't been on JPF for a few days but I wanted to take the time to at least acknowledge your advice. smile

First of all, thank you very much for taking the time to listen to my song, I really really do appreciate it. smile And I'll definitely keep your advice in mind! I am ready to begin recording the vocals, so I hope to do that this week and when I'm done, I'll post it here.

Just wanted to add that I took some of the critiques I got here and have made some good changes to the song. I did realize the song was a bit long, but now it's been sped up, so it's a lot shorter. smile And I also rewrote the second verse so that I wasn't twisting and stretching so many words and to make everything a little more clear. And it sounds better. smile