Can tell by your attention on this one Lisa that you like what you are doing with it. The re-writes are tightening it up very well and your attention to the rhyming pattern helped me with the flow. (Tried to get a feel for it on my guitar, found something I liked but then it left. Sometimes does that. blush )

This is really coming along nicely. Good job!

douglas


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